It is obvious that if you start writing without deciding what to write (beforehand), unless you are very used to writing, you will not be able to develop or organize your ideas.
According to the Japanese government, the number of foreign tourists is increasing rapidly. Some of them are interested in traditional Japanese culture and visit temples.
Others enjoy Japanese food, which is becoming (increasingly) popular because it is healthy.
Making mistakes is not always a bad thing, because you can learn many things from (your) experience. The important thing is to try to avoid the same mistake.
In modern life, everyone (often) has a lot of stress by doing things such as getting moderate exercise, listening to music, or spending time in natural surroundings.
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